Betrayal Has a Terrible Start

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1. The Mc Is Just Battle Maniac And Her IQ Didn't Increase When She Add Point In Spirit Her Personality Is Not Even True Evil In My Own Opinion Its Just Chaotic Evil/Madman She Actually Believed That She Is True Evil/True Villain In Final Chapter She Met God/System That Laughs At Her Own Claim Of Being True Villain On Final Analysis She Is Just Similar To Orochimaru Downgraded IQ +Madara Fighting Enthusiasm + Danzo Upper Grade Behavior + Hiruzen Middle Grade Political View + Jeraiya Talent In Writing H-Novel And She Believe That She Is True Evil To My Opinion True Evil Is Person With Perfect Schemes,Perfect Plans,Perfect Strategys,Completely Manipulative,Has High EQ [IQ Is Optional It Could Be Moderate Or High As long Its Not Low IQ],Can Assimilate Himself To Anykind Of Society At Will Means He Can Disguised His Personality And Thought Process In Any kind Of Environment,He Should Be Willing To Sacrifice Anything That Could Be Sacrifice Without Hesitation,He Should Be Carefull And Carefree Means He Should Be Able To Separate His Job And Personal Lifestyle Mind Set To Be More Unpredictable Etc

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2. It's quite disappointing. I thought it was going to be good but it fell below my expectation. The author tried to write it as dark as he could but it just doesn't make much sense. I have a feeling that the only reason why the mc treats the ninja world as a game is becuase of her system. Without the system, I felt like the mc's personality would be a bit different. Only here because of seeing the male to female tag and it fulfilled my desire, the rest is not very good but you would like it if you have a particular liking to dark things which include human experiment, disregard of human morality, and purely interest driven. And I particularly like mc who is interest driven but not too much, also her selfishness is very refreshing to say the least, completely different from those mcs that think with their dick or sexual desire. Though I feel quite bad for those civilians, they die like everywhere.

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3. Hsj hak

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4. Hhhhhh djfjf

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5. Khhd . . . . . . . Hik

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6. Endingnya bagus,tapi bagi yang kurang suka mungkin rada bosan baca ceritanya.

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7. Bro bisa spil nama karakter gak? Aku kesusahan sama nama chinanya. Bener² bingung gw, soalnya baru kemari untuk fandom naruto

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8. karakter novel ini ta?

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